江苏高考英语读写类作文讲评.ppt

1、读写任务型写作分为两部分：读写任务型写作分为两部分：第一部分第一部分要求用要求用约约30个词概括所给短文的要点个词概括所给短文的要点，主，主要以记叙文要以记叙文,议论文议论文,说明文为主。说明文为主。第二部分第二部分以约以约120个词就短文某一主题谈论自己的个词就短文某一主题谈论自己的经历并发表看法经历并发表看法。此项旨在着重考查学生学习英语的综合能力，特别此项旨在着重考查学生学习英语的综合能力，特别是阅读写作以及思维的能力。第一部分要求学生能是阅读写作以及思维的能力。第一部分要求学生能读懂文章，在读懂的基础上概括文章要点，所以阅读懂文章，在读懂的基础上概括文章要点，所以阅读能力和概括能力要求

2、较高。读能力和概括能力要求较高。写作要求分析Technique Guides概括概括叙事性叙事性(narrative)文章文章主要内容一般应包括主要内容一般应包括四个方面的内容：四个方面的内容：1.什么人？什么人？(Who)2.发生什么事情？发生什么事情？(What happened)3.目的如何目的如何/原因是什么？原因是什么？(Why)4.结果如何结果如何/什么启示或教训？什么启示或教训？(Consequence/Inspiration/Lesson)You may begin like these:1.The passage/story is mainly about(talks abo

3、ut)+a story/phenomenon where/that+从句从句2.The writer tells/shows/states us that 3.As is shown in the passage,4.What the passage tells/shows/states us is that 故事性阅读材料，应该用故事性阅读材料，应该用最简练的语言最简练的语言来说明故来说明故事事讲述讲述了什么，还可以了什么，还可以讲述该故事给你的启示讲述该故事给你的启示(inspiration)或其中的一个道理或其中的一个道理(principle)。Transitionalsentences

4、 connecting your experienceActually,in real life,everyone can have an experience of Having read the passage,I think of After reading the passage,I am lost in thought,which reminds me of What a touching story,which reminds me of How to polish up your writingGeneralAdvancedgetfinishlikecareconsideruse

5、importantacquire/attain/obtainaccomplish/completeappreciate/be fond of/prefer concerntakeinto consideration/account make use of/take advantage ofbe of vital/great importanceGeneralAdvancedsadhappybadgreatverydepressed/upset/in low spiritscheerful/delighted/thrilled/pleasedawful/unpleasant/horribleam

6、azing/admirable/awesome/brilliant/excellent/enjoyable/fantasticbadly/dramatically/especially/rather/pretty/perfectly/awfully/amazingly各各种种从从句句非非谓谓语语倒倒装装句句型型with复复合合结结构构强强调调句句型型省省略略句句型型祈祈使使句句型型虚虚拟拟语语气气巧用副词不让句子裸奔Obviously,most of people lack the consciousness of public safety.Surprisingly,the fatal st

7、ampede led to 36 deaths and dozens of injuries.Definitely,we should put our security in the first place.Personally,a series of prevention measures must be taken to guarantee public order.有没有副词效果确实不一样！I believe thatI suggest thatI hope thatI support thatI _ believe thatI _suggest thatI _hope thatI _s

8、upport thatfirmlystronglysincerelyfully/completely/entirely/absolutely（1）Summarize incomplete idea（2）Misuse/misunderstand original passage（3）Too many mistakes made in sentence structures（4）Express opinions too early（5）Apply the suggestions from original passage（6）Too simple sentences本次作文中存在的问题：Usual

9、ly the beginning of a summary is:1.The passage mainly discusses that2.We can know from the passage that3.As far as the author is concerned,4.In the passage,the author mainly stressed that议论性议论性(argumentative)的阅读短文，则要尽的阅读短文，则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点，而非可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点，而非描述细节。描述细节。说明性说明性(illustrative)短文短文,你就必须用概括的文字你就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象。来说明某种现象。You may begin like these:1.It is stated in the article that2.According to the passage,we can know that 3.In the passage,the author states that 4.The passage points out that